On Friday my class and the school went on a picnic to the beach.The beach that we went to was point England reverse.When we got there we all sit down on the grass. Then Mr Burt said to us that we were not to go past the teacher. When Mr Burt was done we all ran and put our bags on the grass. I was playing with my friend Kane. Me and Kane were playing cricket.
After playing cricket me and Kane went to the beach and went for a swim. Me and Kane were playing wrestling with Jesaih,James and Waata. Then Mr Burt said that we had to get our so we did. Then Kane said that he was going to eat so I went with him.The year 6 boy wanted to play touch with the year 7. So I went to play with them and Kane went to play cricket again. Yes” we beat the year 6’s.The year 6’s were sad because the lose. but we said to them good game and the were happy.
After that Mr Burt said to pack up and we did and we went back to school and went home. THE END
After playing cricket me and Kane went to the beach and went for a swim. Me and Kane were playing wrestling with Jesaih,James and Waata. Then Mr Burt said that we had to get our so we did. Then Kane said that he was going to eat so I went with him.The year 6 boy wanted to play touch with the year 7. So I went to play with them and Kane went to play cricket again. Yes” we beat the year 6’s.The year 6’s were sad because the lose. but we said to them good game and the were happy.
After that Mr Burt said to pack up and we did and we went back to school and went home. THE END
Hi Lorenzo,
ReplyDeleteI am glad that you enjoyed your time at the beach. I have never played cricket before but it sounds like a lot of fun! Keep up the good work.
Best,
Miss Rogers