When I got to school I was so happy that it was school camp today.first we got in to our team and then we went to the swimming pool.while waiting to get to the pool we all sing a song on the bus.then when we got to the pool we got change.After we got change we had racing.After our race we had free time me and my friend Dillon were playing wrestling Dillon was beating me up and I was tried.Then when we left we went back to school.
Hi Lorenzo,
ReplyDeleteI really like your writing. It is very interesting. Just a friendly advice, you have a little mistake in there. But over all I like your writing. Good work and keep it up.
Victoria