Friday, November 4, 2011

GOING TO SPACE


It was 1998 of May and the world end. But lucky I was a arsonist and I had my rocket too. the next day I started to prepare my stuff and pack my bag and get some food. 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 GO I went fast like a jets my rocket had smoke and fire coming out. poor Earth falling apart good bye home I was on my way to Jupiter. when I got there it was huge planet I was scared because I thought there was alien so I landed on the planet.looking around scared but I saw little ring on Jupiter because Four planets have rings system: Saturn, Jupiter, Uranus, and Neptune. Saturn is best know because it has the brightest and most extensive rings system in the Solar System.but what can I do he wait I can see some body it jesiah. me and jesiah play chess and touch outside so me and jesiah went to Saturn. so me and jesiah just keep going around in space the end.

1 comment:

  1. Hello Lorenzo K-B,
    My name is Christopher Reindl and I am student in EDM310 at the University of South Alabama. I quite enjoyed your story about going to Jupiter. I thought I would share some fun facts. Jupiter is called a gas giant because of it's huge volume and the fact that it is made up of primarily gas. It also has many moons. I wanted to point out that in your second sentence you might have meant to say Astronaut and not arsonist. An arsonist sets things on fire for no reason. I really enjoyed your story and hope that you keep writing.
    Thanks,
    Christopher Reindl

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