So happy to go to Sylvia Park because it fun at movie and you are with friends.
On wednesday our school went to sylvia park to the movie to watch other school movies. When we got there we hop off the bus and got into line. Then we started to walk to the movies. We had to walk up the step but I ran up. When we sat down I sat next to my friend waata and my teacher.
When all the school’s sat down then the light all turn off. When I was watching it I was eating chips. When our school movie play I cheer and then stop. After all the movie where finish we got back on the bus and went back to school and went home.
My favourite movie was the One Direction East Syde Styles.
Hey Lorenzo
ReplyDeleteThis is a good post about our annual film festival. I really enjoyed it too. I like the One Direction East Syde Style as well. Maybe you should work on proof reading your blog post because some of your sentences don't make sense. Anyway, Keep up the good work Lorenzo.
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Kia Ora Lorenzo,
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you enjoyed your film experience.
Next time read your story aloud and ask yourself, "does that make sense?" This helps with checking to see if you need to change some things.